Spring Poem by NEETHA SASIDHARAN

Spring

Rating: 3.9


seasons always comes my way
and all makes me gay..
some makes me scorchy
and yet others wetty..

but colourful wishings
gives my heart some shakings
and what else comes to your mind
other than the spring, which is so kind? ? ?

it fills your eyes
and makes you feel so high.
neither scorchy nor so wetty
and never forgets to make you jolly..

it makes you so excited
and kids on trees are sighted,
plucking fruits with all their might..
imagine their mom's plight! ! !

inspite of being crazy
it does make you springy.
the only season that wishes
you with flowers.....

its not just a season
it gives you lot of lessons-
being pleasant and never late
- one thing that you should emulate...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shihabudheen K J 31 August 2012

Felt like a nice story said.spring always dreams us

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Rahul Sharma 29 September 2012

Nice piece of write Neetha, u may also read my poem The Sixth Season

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Rahul Sharma 21 October 2012

Cool poem dear, tried ur best to carve the spring beauty within ur lines, are u so keen with rhyming! ?

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Sumanta Roy 20 November 2012

enjoy the poem. I LIKE THE LAST FOUR LINES

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Valsa George 02 December 2012

The flawless musings of a young heart holding a lot of promise for tomorrow! ! Commendable job! ! May more poems flow from your pen, Neetha!

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Jazib Kamalvi 28 April 2019

Very impressive write, Neetha Sasidharan. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Ramesh Rai 17 May 2014

A sweet write with an outstanding imagery. beautiful job.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 03 September 2013

A very nice poem I appreciate it. In the first and second stanza editing is need to set right the singular plural problems.It is my request as you have talent to write

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Vijay Sai R 19 July 2013

a spring blooming so beautifully

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Anoop Nair 06 April 2013

Its probably good for school kids because of the beiginning of vacation right.Any ways Good job.Congartulations

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