Rookie - 107 Points (25-03-1996 / KERALA)


seasons always comes my way
and all makes me gay..
some makes me scorchy
and yet others wetty..

but colourful wishings
gives my heart some shakings
and what else comes to your mind
other than the spring, which is so kind? ? ?

it fills your eyes
and makes you feel so high.
neither scorchy nor so wetty
and never forgets to make you jolly..

it makes you so excited
and kids on trees are sighted,
plucking fruits with all their might..
imagine their mom's plight! ! !

inspite of being crazy
it does make you springy.
the only season that wishes
you with flowers.....

its not just a season
it gives you lot of lessons-
being pleasant and never late
- one thing that you should emulate...

Comments about Spring by NEETHA SASIDHARAN

  • Ramesh Rai (5/17/2014 5:30:00 AM)

    A sweet write with an outstanding imagery. beautiful job. (Report) Reply

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  • Nasarudheen Parameswaran (9/3/2013 9:06:00 AM)

    A very nice poem I appreciate it. In the first and second stanza editing is need to set right the singular plural problems.It is my request as you have talent to write (Report) Reply

  • (7/19/2013 12:22:00 PM)

    a spring blooming so beautifully (Report) Reply

  • (4/6/2013 1:18:00 AM)

    Its probably good for school kids because of the beiginning of vacation right.Any ways Good job.Congartulations (Report) Reply

  • Adeline Foster (12/22/2012 12:32:00 PM)

    I too have written one called -Spring - You will enjoy the similarity.
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  • Kanav Justa (12/13/2012 2:09:00 AM)

    we all love spring, , , , beautifully expressed, , , (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (12/2/2012 6:12:00 AM)

    The flawless musings of a young heart holding a lot of promise for tomorrow! ! Commendable job! ! May more poems flow from your pen, Neetha! (Report) Reply

  • Sumanta Roy (11/20/2012 9:38:00 AM)

    enjoy the poem.
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  • Rahul Sharma (10/21/2012 3:56:00 AM)

    Cool poem dear, tried ur best to carve the spring beauty within ur lines, are u so keen with rhyming! ? (Report) Reply

  • Rahul Sharma (9/29/2012 11:19:00 AM)

    Nice piece of write Neetha, u may also read my poem The Sixth Season (Report) Reply

  • Shihabudheen K J (8/31/2012 12:58:00 PM)

    Felt like a nice story said.spring always dreams us (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 27, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, August 27, 2012

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