My True Faith Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

My True Faith

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My true faith

She is my true faith
I wished her to remain same till death
That was real feeling from inside
But alas! The distance was very much wide

She has lived very far
I can see her like only star
Not distance may matter
Yet she is world too far

How to tell her about unseen love?
I feel it from deep and believe
She can be mine on any one day
She is keen too but far away

"Safoof, Safoof * I have friend
She murmured and silently quieted
I repeated her to clarify
She smiled and tried to satisfy

He is friend to whom I admired
Played, dreamed and stared
But could not reach him for unknown reasons
I loved him till date as very good person

We are on same boat and I miss the same
I tried to convince and staked a claim
She promised not to discourage but consented
I felt whole world at feet and got elated

"Inshaallah"* we shall meet some where"
In this birth if that is the wish to be met here
I promise to hold it good for you
If words spoken by you is true

I am magically spelled
She opens her lips as not labeled
She is one of the most beautiful I dreamed and desired
Always at heart and adorably admired

I sink daily merely by her look
She has charm of divine book
I try to read her face and again fail
She is no where near me to avail

Inshaallh.. Wish of the almighty

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 September 2012

Long and a tiny bit confusing Kyla Gray1 hour ago This was good. it was also very long. Thank you for sharing. I didn't get it. Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago it is true feeling for love and frank admission +1 it's pretty good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 September 2012

Sim Plexity1 hour ago there's a rhythm and continuity to it i just felt too many of the same words were used to rhyme or compare to. Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago site single repetition, i bet, though poem is finished at one go

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 September 2012

My true faith She is my true faith I wished her to remain same till death

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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