I NEVA FELT SO GREAT WHEN I MET THE RITE ONE BECAUSE HE BRING ME JOY HAPPINESS AND OTHER THINGS IN MY LIFE CAUSE WHEN IM WITH HIM I FELL GOOD INSIDE MY BABY TREAT ME RITE AND TAKE CARE OF ME HE JUST MY EVERYTHING N MY LIFE I BEEN THROUGH ALOT BUT NOW IM BEEN SO NOT OUT OF STRESS JUST BEENIN WITH HIM MAKES ME COMPLETE CAUSE HE COMPLETE ME HE BE THE BEST MAN THAT HE CAN N I LOVE HIM
For review purposes, I will accept that what you wrote is a poem, Jessica, though there does not appear to be any form to it other than possibly free style. It is written in slang, without any punctuation and in capital letters as well. There is certainly a lot of emotion in this write and it does tell a story of sorts. Now, there is nothing wrong with being a little different in poetry style or make up, since rules for poetry (unless you write in a specific form) are pretty liberal. I do not know how much poetry you have read, but it wouldn't hurt to familarize yourself with some of the famous poets that can be found on this site, like Pablo Nureda, Maya Angelou, Emily Dickinson, or Emily Jane Bronte. I think that will help you learn more about the wonders of poetry. Carl.
A true love is what everyone desires my dear and infact it's true love that actually refines a human being........A good use of imagery in words........10/10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
u given a beautiful piece of short story with minute emtions...... nice