My Turn Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

My Turn

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I was rude and selfish
I wanted her to be finished
Not physically but morally
As I wanted the life differently

I had inherited wealth
That was ill gotten from somebody's death
People say" My father was moneylender"
Very hard looking, unkind and ill wisher

Wife had been so kind
Sympathetic and mild
I never thought ill of her
But I was fallen in love for other

I did not find any other way
I told her to be away
She was shocked but obeyed my wish
I deserted her for fake dreams to accomplish

Some years after, I developed some disease
So long money helped the life to be at ease
She pushed me away to be on road
I was once again dependant on the mercy of God

I remembered wife once again
She had sent feelers often
I decided to return
Now it was my turn

(To be continued)

Friday, June 20, 2014
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I was rude and selfish I wanted her to be finished

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I was rude and selfish I wanted her to be finished

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The spin of the karmic wheel. Excellent write, Master Hasmukh. 45 minutes ago by Great Mystery | Reply

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Inspired after Reading Ann Chen20 minutes ago People can be pretty stubborn most of the time, specially after you've reached a certain age. Something I recently learned from not only myself, but also my parents. However, it doesn't mean that change is impossible. It just means that you have to walk that extra mile or be encountered with a certain obstacle to want to Change :) Comment 0 15 minutes a

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Good poetic writing Denisha Irene Burton21 minutes ago I like your writing style. It is good work. It is not my typical genre of poetry, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. Comment 0 15 minutes

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 June 2014

Beautiful and thoughtful write. Very true said, it happens many times. Loved reading it.

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The spin of the karmic wheel. Excellent write, Master Hasmukh. 20 Jun by Great Mystery to My turn

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welcome mericel remirez Just now · Unlike · 1

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Well written Dimitri Jagodinski22 minutes ago Hope things work out Comment 0 15 minutes

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very summersby thesea19 minutes ago sad but honest. Comment 0 14 minutes ago by hasmukh amathalal | Reply

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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