poet Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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My World/Your World/Our World

I have accepted your comments made to me,
That I live in my own world.
And I've learned not to argue but agree.
However...
Don't you believe you should more address,
Your world.
And the mess that it is in?
Or has denial blinded you?

And keep this in mind,
It is our world...
Needing the attention.
Not specifically me you seek to demean.

Poem Submitted: Friday, January 20, 2012
Poem Edited: Saturday, January 21, 2012

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