Mystery In Cloud Poem by Anita Sharma

Mystery In Cloud

Rating: 5.0


open blessed sky
let know i cry
Feeling alone in the desert cold
Let know one pass by
emptiness is deep
Without looking back
feeling eternally blessed
graced
Without expressing
love for you
who are you?
even in a cloud

Mystery In Cloud
Saturday, November 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life,mystery
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
bliss comes from anywhere right after darkness we should be hopeful, faith and prayers are brighter then any darkness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 24 November 2015

Emptiness is very deep but feeling this in grace of life expresses love in cloud. Super composition shared with great imagery and feeling. Nicely drafted poem shared here.10

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M Asim Nehal 14 November 2015

Superb.......Crafty poem, I liked it. emptiness is deep Without looking back feeling eternally blessed graced

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