Anita Sharma

A Walk In The Rainy Day - Poem by Anita Sharma

A drop fell on my temple,
Another fell on my eyes and brim,
A half of dozen kissed my bosom and core,
And made my soul chuckle out loud.

A few fell out on the pavement! ! ! !
they went out to wash the grime,
I envisage are they pearls,
What neck-late could i abrade,

The meadow replaced in shinny fish pond,
The birds are chanting and frolicking,
The sunshine spread the hue...
The rainbow slit from the sky,

The galaxy bringing down million orbs,
And showering them in the hazy delight,
and gloom is falling from the space,
now chasing the song of the birds at dawn..

Topic(s) of this poem: love and loss, narrative, nature

Form: Ballad

Poet's Notes about The Poem

a walk in the rainy day love all around feeling blessed

Comments about A Walk In The Rainy Day by Anita Sharma

  • (5/22/2016 2:20:00 AM)

    beautiful piece of work anita, the lovers of rain will be delighted after reading this, amazing work, keep it up, you can even go through my poems and comment if you like (Report) Reply

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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (5/17/2016 11:50:00 AM)

    And made my soul chuckle out loud.
    he birds are chanting and frolicking,
    now chasing the song of the birds at dawn......... thank you my dear Anita..... these are really poetic lines that come out of a really poetic soul...... yours is that....... God bless you dear poetess anita
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  • The Poet Poet (12/16/2015 3:26:00 PM)

    its rhythmic
    sine-curvy and lovely rainy poetry
    we all love to dance
    romance and prance
    in Rome or France

    in rain alone we love romance
    as drops of rain fall on us
    and remind us
    of tears of joy
    which arise within
    it must rain again
    ere the storm or snow dissolves
    all of it

    alas in love
    not in vain
    let rains drops
    on us everlastingly remain
    what a lovely fountain...
    (Report) Reply

  • Kim Barney (11/8/2015 12:09:00 AM)

    Very nice. I could feel the rain falling on me as I read your poem. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (10/14/2015 9:02:00 AM)

    Verily, a poem full of imagery and natural essence
    Loved reading it ....10
    I invite you to read my poems
    (Report) Reply

  • Soulful Heart (9/28/2015 11:27:00 PM)

    wow....a spirited girl opens her heart........chuckle all along n may your words rain search pearls for ever..... (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (9/22/2015 5:33:00 AM)

    And made my soul chuckle out loud. i liked these lines and i smiled as i read it.
    now chasing the song of the birds at dawn.. very poetic . thank you
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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/20/2015 6:22:00 AM)

    Awesome poetry with series of imagery............I liked it....10++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 19, 2015

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