A Walk In The Rainy Day Poem by Anita Sharma

A Walk In The Rainy Day

Rating: 5.0


A drop fell on my temple,
Another fell on my eyes and brim,
A half of dozen kissed my bosom and core,
And made my soul chuckle out loud.

A few fell out on the pavement! ! ! !
they went out to wash the grime,
I envisage are they pearls,
What neck-late could i abrade,

The meadow replaced in shinny fish pond,
The birds are chanting and frolicking,
The sunshine spread the hue...
The rainbow slit from the sky,

The galaxy bringing down million orbs,
And showering them in the hazy delight,
and gloom is falling from the space,
now chasing the song of the birds at dawn..

A Walk In The Rainy Day
Saturday, September 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and loss,narrative,nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
a walk in the rainy day love all around feeling blessed
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 20 September 2015

Awesome poetry with series of imagery............I liked it....10++

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 September 2015

And made my soul chuckle out loud. i liked these lines and i smiled as i read it. now chasing the song of the birds at dawn.. very poetic . thank you

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Soulful Heart 28 September 2015

wow....a spirited girl opens her heart........chuckle all along n may your words rain search pearls for ever.....

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Shrutika Kahale 22 May 2016

beautiful piece of work anita, the lovers of rain will be delighted after reading this, amazing work, keep it up, you can even go through my poems and comment if you like

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 May 2016

And made my soul chuckle out loud. he birds are chanting and frolicking, now chasing the song of the birds at dawn......... thank you my dear Anita..... these are really poetic lines that come out of a really poetic soul...... yours is that....... God bless you dear poetess anita

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 16 December 2015

its rhythmic sine-curvy and lovely rainy poetry we all love to dance romance and prance in Rome or France in rain alone we love romance as drops of rain fall on us and remind us of tears of joy which arise within it must rain again ere the storm or snow dissolves all of it alas in love not in vain let rains drops on us everlastingly remain what a lovely fountain...

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Kim Barney 08 November 2015

Very nice. I could feel the rain falling on me as I read your poem. Well done.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 14 October 2015

Verily, a poem full of imagery and natural essence Loved reading it ....10 I invite you to read my poems

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