A Walk In The Rainy Day
Rating: ★5.0
A drop fell on my temple,
Another fell on my eyes and brim,
A half of dozen kissed my bosom and core,
And made my soul chuckle out loud.
A few fell out on the pavement! ! ! !
they went out to wash the grime,
I envisage are they pearls,
What neck-late could i abrade,
The meadow replaced in shinny fish pond,
The birds are chanting and frolicking,
The sunshine spread the hue...
The rainbow slit from the sky,
The galaxy bringing down million orbs,
And showering them in the hazy delight,
and gloom is falling from the space,
now chasing the song of the birds at dawn..
Another fell on my eyes and brim,
A half of dozen kissed my bosom and core,
And made my soul chuckle out loud.
A few fell out on the pavement! ! ! !
they went out to wash the grime,
I envisage are they pearls,
What neck-late could i abrade,
The meadow replaced in shinny fish pond,
The birds are chanting and frolicking,
The sunshine spread the hue...
The rainbow slit from the sky,
The galaxy bringing down million orbs,
And showering them in the hazy delight,
and gloom is falling from the space,
now chasing the song of the birds at dawn..
Saturday, September 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and loss,narrative,nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
a walk in the rainy day love all around feeling blessed
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COMMENTS
Shrutika Kahale
22 May 2016
beautiful piece of work anita, the lovers of rain will be delighted after reading this, amazing work, keep it up, you can even go through my poems and comment if you like
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Dr Antony Theodore
17 May 2016
And made my soul chuckle out loud.
he birds are chanting and frolicking,
now chasing the song of the birds at dawn......... thank you my dear Anita..... these are really poetic lines that come out of a really poetic soul...... yours is that....... God bless you dear poetess anita
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Me Poet Yeps Poet
16 December 2015
its rhythmic
sine-curvy and lovely rainy poetry
we all love to dance
romance and prance
in Rome or France
in rain alone we love romance
as drops of rain fall on us
and remind us
of tears of joy
which arise within
it must rain again
ere the storm or snow dissolves
all of it
alas in love
not in vain
let rains drops
on us everlastingly remain
what a lovely fountain...
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Kim Barney
08 November 2015
Very nice. I could feel the rain falling on me as I read your poem. Well done.
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti
14 October 2015
Verily, a poem full of imagery and natural essence
Loved reading it ....10
I invite you to read my poems
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Soulful Heart
28 September 2015
wow....a spirited girl opens her heart........chuckle all along n may your words rain search pearls for ever.....
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Dr Antony Theodore
22 September 2015
And made my soul chuckle out loud. i liked these lines and i smiled as i read it.
now chasing the song of the birds at dawn.. very poetic . thank you
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M Asim Nehal
20 September 2015
Awesome poetry with series of imagery............I liked it....10++
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