Golden Fish

Rating: 4.0
bend and keep picking up rocks,

from the ground

have shine like gold

like ecstasy familiar

but look,

i am a golden fish

i am already in the ocean
Wednesday, September 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
inspired by Khusro dariya prem ka, ulti va ki dhaar,
Jo utra so doob gaya, Jo Dooba So Paar.

Khusro, the river of love has a reverse flow
He who enters will drown, he who drowns will get across.
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COMMENTS
Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 21 September 2017
Thanks for poem it is the best poem and lovely poem
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Dr Antony Theodore 18 May 2016
Leaving the material sphere a spiritual seeker should dwell deep into the ocean of love , get drowned to reach the other shore of God's love. a great theme........ a grand truth........... let us drown ourselves to reach the shore of God. tha nk you dear poetess for this wonderful poem..... tony
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Khairul Ahsan 21 October 2015
Not very clear about what the poem conveys and what the Poet's Note means.
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Anita Sharma 29 October 2015
well here let me explain a bit about this poem bend and keep picking up rocks it means we always have worked up for which is so materialist we have only seen shine like but we haven't looked for the actual bliss we have never found that, we are so stuck, but for the bliss we have to go much deeper to fine the love god we have to go more deeper and further, this poem is inspired from famous quote by ameer khusro, , khusro dariya prem ka ulti vaa ki dhaar jo utra so doob gaya jo dooba so paar, , Khusro, the river of love has a reverse flow He who enters will drown, he who drowns will get across
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Soulful Heart 28 September 2015
short n sweet......a golden fish that's turned into poet I suppose
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Anita Sharma 10 September 2015
thanku for liking this poem guys i will post few more
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Kelly Kurt 09 September 2015
A fun little poem, Anita. Thanks for sharing
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Anita Sharma 10 September 2015
thnks kelly
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M Asim Nehal 09 September 2015
Loved it.................Golden fish in ocean.......10
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Anita Sharma 10 September 2015
thnku sir
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