Anita Sharma

Golden Fish - Poem by Anita Sharma

bend and keep picking up rocks,

from the ground

have shine like gold

like ecstasy familiar

but look,

i am a golden fish

i am already in the ocean

Topic(s) of this poem: love and art

Form: Ballad

Poet's Notes about The Poem

inspired by Khusro dariya prem ka, ulti va ki dhaar,
Jo utra so doob gaya, Jo Dooba So Paar.

Khusro, the river of love has a reverse flow
He who enters will drown, he who drowns will get across.

Comments about Golden Fish by Anita Sharma

  • Ranjan Kumar Ghosh (9/21/2017 2:42:00 AM)

    Thanks for poem it is the best poem and lovely poem (Report) Reply

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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (5/18/2016 7:05:00 AM)

    Leaving the material sphere a spiritual seeker should dwell deep into the ocean of love , get drowned to reach the other shore of God's love. a great theme........ a grand truth........... let us drown ourselves to reach the shore of God. tha nk you dear poetess for this wonderful poem..... tony (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (10/21/2015 1:24:00 PM)

    Not very clear about what the poem conveys and what the Poet's Note means. (Report) Reply

    Anita Sharma (10/29/2015 5:36:00 PM)

    well here let me explain a bit about this poem bend and keep picking up rocks it means we always have worked up for which is so materialist we have only seen shine like but we haven't looked for the actual bliss we have never found that, we are so stuck, but for the bliss we have to go much deeper to fine the love god we have to go more deeper and further, this poem is inspired from famous quote by ameer khusro, , khusro dariya prem ka ulti vaa ki dhaar jo utra so doob gaya jo dooba so paar, , Khusro, the river of love has a reverse flow
    He who enters will drown, he who drowns will get across

  • Soulful Heart (9/28/2015 11:24:00 PM)

    short n sweet......a golden fish that's turned into poet I suppose (Report) Reply

  • Anita Sharma (9/10/2015 12:14:00 PM)

    thanku for liking this poem guys i will post few more (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (9/9/2015 8:41:00 PM)

    A fun little poem, Anita. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

    Anita Sharma (9/10/2015 12:12:00 PM)

    thnks kelly

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/9/2015 12:59:00 PM)

    Loved it.................Golden fish in ocean.......10 (Report) Reply

    Anita Sharma (9/10/2015 12:11:00 PM)

    thnku sir

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 9, 2015

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 29, 2015

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