N- After Rain * Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

N- After Rain *

Rating: 5.0


After rain the sky is more dark blue...
After fight, reconciliation is more sweet...
After misunderstanding...
Everyone words over another sounds...
And by eyes sincerity - betterly shines...
After rain the sky is more dark blue...

7.01.09.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew mark Wilkinson 07 January 2009

smiles, well I hope so, don't it make my blue eyes blue..

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Kris Smith 07 January 2009

Dark blue skies and the warm wind sighs and clouds have tears no more 10 +++ Chris

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Catrina Heart 18 January 2009

food for the thoughts...very well said my friend...beautiful and classy like the poetess herself...10+++

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Vaibhav Pandey 18 January 2009

m'am, your style of writing is very adorable.... 10

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Sue Ann Simar 17 January 2009

I think when one isn't writing in their first language sometimes wonderfully inventive accidents happen: I think the line 'Everyone words to another sound' is one of those beautiful accidents.

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~ Jon London ~ 09 January 2009

Lovely piece of poetry, your ability to capture a moment is your muse...and thats what makes you one of the finest poets here at P.H.........love your work 10+ best wishes Jon x

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Ency Bearis 07 January 2009

And eyes sincerity is better shines After the rain the sky is more dark blue Clouds curtained the passion due So no one will ever know With wink of the blue eyes that glows Lovely write...provoked my creativity with your verses..great piece..10

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