Name To Adore Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Name To Adore

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Many people talk of danger
Hazards and about un known factors
They paint gloomy picture
To project woes of other people

If destiny has decided to keep you poor
You shall remain so and knock door to door
Not even big help can come neighbor
That shall never give you any kind of honor

Some of the facts we got to agree
Nobody can be partner or accomplice
We have to go in with determination
As life can not be ended with isolation

Hunger may put you out of gear
No one may want to come near
Yet the life can be shaped
Try must be on even if flopped

Everybody may pray for rising sun
No one may go in for last run
Life has zigzag path and curve
We need to be cautious and observe

So many people have risen
By sheer ability of chosen path
They were nothing before
But now add name to adore

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 April 2014

Many people talk of danger Hazards and about un known factors

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 April 2014

Love it! Danni Davenport13 minutes ago Very lovely

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 April 2014

Good Emotional Expression Anna Laurencio13 minutes ago Good Emotional Expression bonne expression émotionnelle Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 April 2014

A great poem with a great message! Thanks for sharing Mehtaji. Much liked the proverb quoted by Dr. Mallick. Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India Apr 15,2014 ________________________________________ A good composition with a very strong message. There is proverb worth reading, 'Destiny is pre-written, but by payers it can be re-written.' Thank you, Hasmukh ji.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 April 2014

t can be re-written.' Thank you, Hasmukh ji. Kumarendra Mallick, Hyderbad Apr 15,2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 April 2014

Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 1 min · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 April 2014

Hasmukh Mehta welcome shujat ahmed and rohini daud 2 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 April 2014

Very nice job hasmukh sumaya sheikh abukar13 minutes ago Keep writing! ! ! Comment +1 Good Emotional Expression

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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