poet Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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So much I want to see you grow.
But not with a holding onto your hand.
Some folks hold on much too long.
To discover,
No one accepts, comprehends OR understands...
Nothing around them.

Although feel entitled to make demands.
They do.
Without making a movement from where they stand.
This is true.
And where they stand is on changing land.
With a movement too.
Land that changes,
No matter who stands making demands to command.
So many refuse to observe a wider view.

And they choose to keep visions,

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 18, 2011
Poem Edited: Thursday, May 19, 2011

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