Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 389,843 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Natural Response - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Nature has granted us feeling
It comes naturally and as willing
It is beautiful attraction like magnetic pull
Life becomes all of sudden meaningful

It is not that love differs from man to animal
It has particular time and waited for arrival
How does branch wear colorful get up in spring?
What else changes it hopes to bring?

A boy attains manhood and tries to mature
Sees the dream and looks forward for future
He has colorful ideas about would be bride
Finds a place where he can go and confide

Human beings have language to express
Beautiful words to be exchanged on face
What a feeling and joy with beautiful company!
A meaningful sojourn and memorable journey

Animals try and express in their own way
They are habitual to human presence and stay
Their behavior and pattern suddenly change
We all come to know about maturity of their age

Birds don’t lag behind and fill the sky
With their beautiful wings and fly
Meet with their long nose and tail
Fight in mid air for love not to fail

They have sense of urgency
They might have less frequency
But full use of season is made
We have made it as hobby and trade

We are not fully alive to the reality
Neither is it the question of female’s vulnerability
Nor the males domination with capability
But essence of love with proper utility

We need to understand from broad perspective
Our quest should be aimed at and very subjective
For some period we may remain active
It must be respected as means to live

If it was so simple, we could have devised
Lived up to expectations as promised
Yet we fail to honor nature as expected
It needs honor and attitude to be respected


Comments about Natural Response by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/19/2011 7:36:00 PM)


    Tara Mowbray umm we are animals..yet we are able to make choices..beyond animal level yes..or no... about an hour ago · Like

    Katherine Wyatt Trinity Poetry very well expressed my friend that last line says so much! 5 hours ago · Like

    Elizabeth Plaza Simply Beautiful 3 minutes ago via mobile · Like
    DeleteT A Ramesh
    Detailed exposition about natural response is interesting to read and think over!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/18/2011 11:24:00 PM)


    Yarbrough
    We are indeed animals, but try to pass that rationalization off to the misses, you'll get mule-kicked. :) Thanks for your thoughtful work.
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 18, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, December 19, 2011


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