Saturday, July 9, 2011

Nature Feeling Me

Rating: 5.0
I look up at the sky

and i began to cry
Then suddenly it began to rain

like the sky could feel my pain

like the clouds could read what was on my mind

and the wind could see what was in my eyes

The sunshine knew what was going on

and the flowers where wondering what wrong

As the grass comforted my feels as if they knew i've been running for miles

as the tress caressed my heart and tried to make me smile

Nature was bu my side and i didnt feel alone

I turned to look at my house which looked nothing of a home

The windows were were frowing and the paint dripped down

Then i looked and the door was upside down

The wires balled up and the railings sagged

the porch fell in and the gates dragged

but still nature was by my side

seems like it was also along for the ride

The weeds told me things will not run by but slide

i was wondering how are they still alive

if the found a way to survive then so will I

because nature was with me, and feeling me: -)

Jamelia Lane
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 09 July 2011
Marvellous poem written with great skill. Rich in imagery and emotions. I liked and rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'ABORTION' on page 4.
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