Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 741,990 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Neither Concept Nor Behavior - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Neither concept nor behavior

Friday, April 20,2018
10: 05 AM


We have not changed
And rightly manage
It is neither with the concept
Nor with an apt behavior

Let people say anything
But we lack something
With regard to the approach towards ladies
Our opinion too varies

We are progressing society
Yet lack of so many ways
We forget about the role of sister and mother
Forget about the angelic position of the daughter

Basically, the ladies have been seen as a supplement to our lust
In doing so, we are losing respect, honor, and trust
Now we can't send our children to neighborhood
The danger in sending is well understood

Ladies go for employment outside
It may be due to compulsion in divided or undivided family
But it helps in coping with financial problems
It is concerning to the majority of them

We show little concern about their plight
And never think right
Their modern dress code makes them follo with bad intention
And such we find the high crime rate in human relation

The social condition is too alarming
The dowry deaths are day by day increasing
Only ladies have to suffer
No one talks louder in their favor

The ordinances or laws make little impact
As its deterrence has not come fully in the act
No rapist is hanged to death
Only social awareness may bring some easy breathing

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Comments about Neither Concept Nor Behavior by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/22/2018 7:30:00 AM)

    We are progressing society/ Yet lack of so many ways/ We forget about the role of sister and mother/ Forget about the angelic position of the daughter - intense lines. We have progressed only to regress and stupe to levels below humanity.

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    Thank you sir for the share.

    Annapurna Sharma, Nellore, Apr 22,2018
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/20/2018 9:43:00 AM)

    Dear Hasmukh, you have given a realstic bird's eyeview of the happenings in our society with regard to the members of the fairer. I
    U Atreya Sarma, Hyderabad, Apr 20,2018
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/20/2018 3:37:00 AM)

    The ordinances or laws make little impact
    As its deterrence has not come fully in the act
    No rapist is hanged to death
    Only social awareness may bring some easy breathing
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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 20, 2018



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