Lyn Paul

Gold Star - 32,622 Points (17.03.1965 / Mt. Barker S.A)

Never Give Up - Poem by Lyn Paul

You have given your all
To the ones you love
Put first their wants
Stayed for them

You've given them all

They have let go
Life's opportunities are open
They've closed the door
The force was stronger

Just wait
Leave the door open


Never give up on those
Those who gave you everything

Copyright Reserved January 26th 2016
Lyn Paul

Topic(s) of this poem: believe, hope

Comments about Never Give Up by Lyn Paul

  • Chinedu Dike (3/15/2017 8:27:00 AM)

    Highly relatable, focussed and factual. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (2/22/2016 2:10:00 AM)

    The force was stronger! But, hope lies ahead. Nice piece of work. (Report) Reply

  • Abderrahmane Dakir (2/4/2016 7:37:00 AM)

    Patience to stay is a key of everything. I enjoyed with it. Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (2/2/2016 9:24:00 PM)

    Hope is the last thing you should lose. It's what was left in Pandora's box when all the ills for the world escaped.
    Hope is precisely what you never give up, as this poem so well expresses and the wise Greek mythology knew.
    You are a gifted poet with a gifted heart.
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  • Kelly Kurt (1/26/2016 12:24:00 PM)

    A difficult decision. You have poured your heart, your life, your essence into someone and they quit. No need to stop caring, but when do you need to let go for your own good and give that love to others who deserve it? (Report) Reply

  • (1/26/2016 11:41:00 AM)

    Never give up. great advice. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • (1/26/2016 6:28:00 AM)

    An inspirational poem with positive approach to life by hoping for the best in even despairing situations. Thanks for sharing.10 points. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (1/26/2016 6:17:00 AM)

    In love everything is pleasing and life's opportunities open in such case. This is very interesting poem shared on really.10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 26, 2016

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 26, 2016

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