Thursday, May 7, 2020

Next Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

With very little thinking tending to zero,
It always dreamed to become a hero,
Got life as a pleasure,
After enjoying this thrilling adventure,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 June 2020

A wonderful poem on life and death sir! Appreciated......10

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Some people made life miserable for others. People who practices violence will end up in violence or suicide. The second stanza is a great imaginative write. A wise alternative. A wonderful poem.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 08 May 2020

sad ending but he enjoyed violining the whole world knows it suicide is news for me

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