Nightis Young Poem by me poet yeps poet

Nightis Young

Rating: 5.0


Every night
before I sleep
get a feeling
am young still

But as I slumber deep
can no more sleep
but with open eyes
i sweep across my life
as it passes by

Then I twist and twirl
my body says stay still

but no one knows
whether I am alive
my night passes
but steadily
hoping I will live

Though deaf
I can hear clearly
the sun's rays
smile at me

Friday, April 3, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: night,poem,poetic expression
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 15 April 2020

thanks to poets below for their comments also

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Anjandev Roy 03 April 2020

Fantastic write. Wonderful to read. anjandev roy.

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Anil Kumar Panda 03 April 2020

Such a brilliant description of one's feeling of restlessness when one goes to sleep at night. Loved the way you have crafted the poem. It is such a delight to read it. Thanks a ton for sharing.10+++

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