Night Of Gentle Breeze Poem by Jesus Diaz Llorico

Night Of Gentle Breeze



'Oh! night of gentle breeze
gliding along the line of trees
why do I always think of you
that even in my bed
with stars twinkling overhead
you put me in sweet harmony
reading your letters and poetry

in a dream you let me see
the history of your city
when I embraced you by my side
you turned your back to me
but from a distance
you looked back and smiled at me
and from where I stand
I knew and understand

when awake in the morning
with the bird's usual calling
I just felt my heart's secured
from you that I adored.'

Saturday, October 22, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jesus Diaz Llorico 23 October 2016

Thank you for a very nice comment Ms Bharati Nayak, really appreciate this...

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Bharati Nayak 23 October 2016

Contrasting images of night and day- - -dream and reality- - have been expressed nicely.Gentle night breeze takes you on a dreamy ride to a distant place, but the morning light wakes you up to the reality.A beautiful write, thanks for shharing.

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