Nightmares 01 Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Nightmares 01

Rating: 5.0


I dream myself often
as a little sardine
In a shoal of a billion
And a hungry shark
feeding on the shoal
Diligently avoiding
preying on me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aarzoo Mehek 31 January 2023

We all try to escape from the reality at some point of time. Thought provoking poem.

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Thank you for the magnificent remark

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That is exactly the meaning of the nightmare, I perceive, Aarzoo

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 January 2023

The gigantic image of a hungry shark makes this poem terrific dear Unniji. A wonderful poem.

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I appreciate the positive energy in every word of Dillipji. Great thinker! Thank you.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 31 January 2023

A big 10 for the nightmare poem. Plus to my favourite to ramain alert and far, far away from sharks.

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Thank you, Geeta for the 10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 31 January 2023

Dear Poet, you are brave and strong. Remain fearless. Just avoid sharks around you.

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Thank you for the personal support

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 31 January 2023

A frighening image of a sardine being chased by a huge army of sharks. A powerful poem but it should never be a reality. Hoping and praying, it is a bad dream.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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