Dónall Dempsey

Veteran Poet - 1,464 Points (15/07/56 / Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.)

Nipped In The Bud - Poem by Dónall Dempsey

As if a sentinel
your nipple
like a great eye

me awake
as you still sleep

I stare
into its unflinching gaze
your nipple & I
eye to eye

you move
through dreams
and your nipple
takes on a life of its own

seeming to say:
'Just you watch it mate
I'm keeping an eye
on you...
...you lay one hand
on her
& I'll have you! '

I drift
back to sleep
under the biligerent
eye of your nipple
smile as I
find you in my dream

Comments about Nipped In The Bud by Dónall Dempsey

  • (11/9/2007 11:42:00 AM)

    This made me laugh so much...only you could have come up with this point of view. Awww...did the big nipple scare you...there...there...it's friendly...very very...friendly! See!

    love Dee dee
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  • (11/5/2007 12:53:00 PM)

    Funny! You always take the strangest route to a love poem that is witty and loving and tender and lingers in the mind. Turning your point of view into this point of view was enough to make a cat laugh. Murphy my cat couldn't stop laughing. Lovely poem if a litttle odd but then you always were a little odd you little sod!

    love GinaXX
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  • (11/5/2007 10:33:00 AM)

    Yep, keeping an eye on you....Sweetie Pie, just knowing that you sleep...and dream there beside...someone? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 5, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, April 22, 2011

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