No Life Without You... - Poem by SWAPNA FERNANDEZ

Hours of darkness,
Covered with stillness,
Feeling of loneliness,
Muddled my heart....

Remembrance of past,
Made a smile on my lips...
But the feeling of loss,
Made me so bleak...

Probed for the reason,
Where I went wrong...
Didn't find the answer,
But felt so unfortunate...

Desire for ma beloved,
Forced me to live...
But an inkling of uncertainty,
Panicked me sometimes...

Constantly tried,
To make my mind calm...
But realized the truth,
That... No life without you...

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Comments about No Life Without You... by SWAPNA FERNANDEZ

  • (3/5/2017 5:24:00 AM)

    "It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live" (Report) Reply

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  • (6/22/2016 2:10:00 AM)

    Loss of love is hard to bear! Oceans give way before love and stars guard the loved ones-that is true love. May god bless you to find true love. (Report) Reply

  • (1/10/2016 1:47:00 PM)

    'No Life Without You' has an anticipating longing that awaits for another
    to recognize what one is feeling inside to understand. Youth...makes these demands.
    It's much like a budding of a flower wishing to be noticed for its beauty.
    At the beginning of its bloom. With it seeking to be sought to be validated.
    Beliving to be less appreciated. The best experience one can have,
    Is to begin to acknowledge a growth process that develops slowly.
    Making attempts to rush through it can be painful for one without patience.
    Nice writing. A bit self centered. But one still young and budding...the process can not be avoided.
    We all go through similar stages of life.
    (Report) Reply

  • Chinedu Dike (3/22/2015 4:44:00 PM)

    A well articulated train of thoughts nicely penned down. You really captured your innermost feeling in the poem. A good poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

  • Swapna Fernandez (3/22/2015 6:49:00 AM)

    Thank you mam (Report) Reply

  • Jaishree Nair (3/22/2015 6:45:00 AM)

    Good write .the flow of words just about describes you.forget the past and live in the present life is too short to have any space for regret. Do keep writing to express ur innermost thoughts. It would be a great relief to share (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 22, 2015

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