No Money No Honey Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

No Money No Honey

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There is always talk of the town
As your tongue is sewn
You are speechless at home
You are pawn in her game

She has made you yes man
You are figure of obedient woman
You are doing whatever she demands
You are more of friend than husband

You have no money
So you are not honey
You are driven easy
As you are not choosey

You will be shunted from place to place
As she will use you horse in race
If you fail to reach home in time
You will forced to say outside sometimes

Learn to live with situation
Earn and love more in continuation
Show your worth to her and prove
Take her hand with pride and move

Create a formidable position and own
Make big name and remain known
All will respect if you have money and position
This old position may remain at back door and in transition

Women may want husband of their choice
Sing to their tunes and commit firm promise
They will submit only when assured of comforts
They will set aside anything even if there are bad reports

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2011

Women may want husband of their choice Sing to their tunes and commit firm promise They will submit only when assured of comforts They will set aside anything even if there are bad reports

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2011

Send message | DeleteChris Jibero I concur.Well written.But do you know that a man who cannot provide the basic needs of his family is said to be worse than an infidel? Please see one of my poems entitiled `Merry Christmas to All Husbands'.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2011

Send message | DeleteRomeo Della Valle This superb write made me laugh since this phrase is commonly heard everyday around here in the Time Square Area where I work! Thank you for sharing! Love and Peace for always!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2011

Send message | » sky high i married not for the security my husband gives but for the partnership he can provide during the easy and tough times of life....not all woman are materialislic in nature but of course its one benefit money can be used to have honey at home... lol..thanks hasmukh

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2011

Send message | » lyra callseml.. women like security.. for teh rpotectoin of offpsring... but not enough for love...only trsoem often traumitzed women will out up wtih anythign for money.. slady those that have bene brainwhasaed iwll caultly submit adn not wnt rlea itnamacy

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 September 2011

All facts not acceptable by women. Well woven. RM Shanmugam chettiar, Chennai Sep 20,2011 ________________________________________ Mr. Mehta, I was stimulated by your poem. I have known what you have stated but never thought it could be converted into a beautiful verse. Your poem has reminded me of a well known verse of the Ramayana: Dhanamaarjayya Kaakutsa dhanamoolam idam jagat I Na pashyami Bhedaha nirdhanasya mrutasya cha All facts not acceptable by women. Well woven. RM Shanmugam chettiar, Chennai Sep 20,2011

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 September 2011

Mr. Mehta, I was stimulated by your poem. I have known what you have stated but never thought it could be converted into a beautiful verse. Your poem has reminded me of a well known verse of the Ramayana: Dhanamaarjayya Kaakutsa dhanamoolam idam jagat I Na pashyami Bhedaha nirdhanasya mrutasya cha

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2011

❤ ♫ ❤ Amarela❤ ♫ ❤ Maybe thats why the divorce rate seems to be rising? Sorry, but many women are dependent on men and thats is wrong and later if no money...no honey...ha ha ha..

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2011

Send message | ».. 'Behind every successful man lies a woman', so said the elders; because women in past have shown that they inspired men to lift heaviest of boulders. Earning enough money as per required standards is definitely duty. It should always be his first and foremost priority. But, that women love their men only for their money is perhaps not correct. Because, varied are the nature of humans, & women's heart, the toughest to dissect. I salute those women who resort to prostitution, To earn money for their husband's treatment & not leave them in destitution. Thanks & Regards.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2011

CHUMKI DUTTA Wish you best of luck in your remaining days, Sir.

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