No One Can Claim Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

No One Can Claim

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It makes us to drive crazy
Even if sometimes we may act lazy
Life is what we have observed to be steady
Not at our attempts but by the grace of almighty

No one can claim and emphatically say
Abut the right or wrong approach on the way
We act merely on good counsel and wisdom
So we never get deviated or fail seldom

We must recognize and believe in simple truth
The tongue has right place behind teeth
No one is allowed to cross the limit
To stay within confined wall and lovingly greet

There is light deep inside that sometimes forbad
From going ahead with bad things or illegal trade
Trade that deals with spread of hatred
Incite people against people and lead

One thing is to be taken for sure
Clear consciousness stops us and assures
Not to adopt any unfair means to pursue
Even if that gives little gain untimely due

That divine flow is meant for all
Even dreaded animal waits for timely call
We are human being and as such must respond
As many fishes may remain peacefully in the pond

I though of burning lamp with its light
As if it was guiding beacon to choose right
And go in direction that can be really helpful
To live as an ordinary man but very much successful

The smoke goes in layer to disappear
And that creates in mind slight fear
To think about uncertain life on earth
Only to disappear with sure existence of death

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 October 2012

It makes us to drive crazy Even if sometimes we may act lazy

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 October 2012

Andrew Samonas10 hours ago There is a good flow and constant reminder of the theme of the poem.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 October 2012

yvonne sensing10 hours ago very creative...well done Comment +1 Decent meaning

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 16 October 2012

No one is allowed to cross the limit To stay within confined wall and lovingly greet Wonderful, I enjoyed reading this poem as it pats my shoulders!

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Savita Tyagi 16 October 2012

Very nice, enjoyed reading.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 October 2012

THE UNREACHABLE Meriam Pasignajen Sombreno Teleron10 hours ago A man has to choose his own right way To make it sure that he may be blessed someday Not turning to evil things nor envy with evildoers. Allowing not to walk with thy own paths But let GOD step as our better-half He gave us senses to become wise enough To acknowledge thy greatness by loving us He created the natures with full of love But man destroyed it and forgot That we are all strangers in this land

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 October 2012

Comment +1 Well done Jared Rodriguez10 hours ago exceptional delivery Comment +1 Goog message Rod Daniel10 hours ago I enjoyed this piece Comment +1 Good good flow and constant reminder of the theme of the poem.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 October 2012

Eric Egeland10 hours ago Keep up the effort Comment +1 An ok poem

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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