No Other Side Poem by me poet yeps poet

No Other Side

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The other side
reminds me
of a young girl

immensely in love
her heart to be removed in the morning

she spoke to me
ere this happened
as if all was normal

She wrote to my daughter
her best companion
meet you on the other side

My daughter cried
and said
Pop I am going

I knew
And 'twas hard to console her
and I said Darling

There is no other side.

come over in my arms
your tears hide
she embraced me
it was a long one

her friend had her unknown journey
by then already begun

solitary
which by now all know
is customary

There is no other side
Believe me...

No Other Side
Thursday, May 3, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: death of a friend,hoping,love and friendship,memorial day,poetry,salvation,spirituality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 07 May 2018

A friend always prays for his dear friend that he may remain always right, so I do it for my friend poet poet, but my heart is sad to fear if there is no other side. How can i pray my dear friend may be be right once again.. The thought is so nicely presented in this lovely poem that it becomes a work of art.

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I know i coz I have been to the other side many times in my life But once I stayed a wee bit longer 5 minutes plus may be and on my return when I awoke I knew there is noother side have you ever seen a dead rat mommy Earth is the only side if you want to then believe me but that's only my vision please Forgive me if on the OTHER SIDE we do meet Jawad AKHTAR Janbh ji

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Kelly Kurt 03 May 2018

Even as an atheist, I cannot say beyond doubt that there is no other side.

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o poet sir.....I know i coz I have been to the other side many times in my life But once I stayed a wee bit longer 5 minutes plus may be and on my return when I awoke I knew there is noother side have you ever seen a dead rat mommy Earth is the only side if you want to then believe me but that's only my vision please Forgive me if on the OTHER SIDE we do meet Jawad AKHTAR Janbh ji and KK

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WE ALL HAVE our own views Have you not seen a DEAD RAT he too had LIFE AND FAMILY THIS POEM HAS BEEN REVISIONED BY KIND COURTESY AN AMERICAN POET HE SAYS ITS POIGNANT

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