Raven: Hate Sorrow Fear Dove: Love Hope Happiness
nobody to love
nobody to hold
nobody to hug
you when your cold
nobody to kiss
no way to grin
after you've
done all those sins
nobody to hug
no way to love
you feel like a raven
instead of a dove
so sweet words from a sweet lovely girl.. who asks about a love and a warm hug.. and asks about a cares from a close one to give her a love taht she seeks for.. so amazing dear sweet girl.. yours.. hazem al.. keep up...
I like the flow, the wording. and the ending. It really kind of ties it up. Which is something that a lot of poems don't do. Very cool. Please feel free to read and comment on my works too. Thank you Rabbit
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The poem provides nice tender feelings. Very nice.