Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 699,603 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Not Dark - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Nights are dark and beautiful
Always trying to be nice and helpful
Each solution is certainly found
When eyes go all over on ground

It makes special drive
For all attempts to survive
Even though nothing is visible
It helps to come out of trouble

Why nights are peaceful?
The light has been so stressful
Now dark provides peace to prevail
Allows all traffic on track of the rail

Just be careful in night
Think of what is really right
Do not go after illusory object
Nothing will be found in fact

Nights may be scary
You may loose sleep unnecessary
Concentrate on what is really needed
No others things are though over or traded

Yes it has open access to eternal world
Where you find beautiful and peaceful fold
No one tries to disturb with prayers of mind
The lord has provided simple means to find


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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/2/2014 9:43:00 PM)

    Maricela Ramírez likes this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/2/2014 8:29:00 PM)

    I feel where you are coming from.

    Alicia Papillion-Matthews28 minutes ago
    I too can find peace in the night and in the Lord, Jesus Christ! I am a night owl! Keep writing, the results are therapeutic!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/2/2014 8:28:00 PM)

    DEEP

    sar g28 minutes ago
    VERY DEEP
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/2/2014 8:27:00 PM)

    ok


    Celeste Travis27 minutes ago
    This could have been better. The line just didn't seem to go together.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/2/2014 8:26:00 PM)

    nice

    Faith Deangelis29 minutes ago
    nice
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/2/2014 7:47:00 PM)

    Nights are dark and beautiful
    Always trying to be nice and helpful
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 2, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, March 3, 2014


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