Not Dead Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Not Dead

Rating: 5.0


For almost a week I have remained unread
Physically fit, mentally stable and not exactly dead
Yet cut off from whole of the word and readers
As power cables here are cut by the road repairers

No doubt, they are seized with the time schedule
They care for nothing as they have to spread the surface over miles
Repair, dig, resurface and keep up with the growing need
The social needs are to be give top priority with the greed

No one may interfere with each others work and continue
Whatever may be the damage on the way, it shall have no review
Many may be thriving on such practice as the work goes on
Public may suffer for few days but may enjoy when they are finally gone

I am unable to communicate with friends
As if the life has been brought to standstill or to an end
Neither I can approach nor can they make contact
I have to remain contended with routine acts

Yes, the isolation from hectic life can be termed as dead activity
You are left with nothing except to sing a song or pray almighty
But this too can be liked by an individual for early morning hours
Rest of the day may be spent aimlessly or lying on the floors

I realized the importance of idle life with that of an individual
Person can feel relieved for few days but can not treat it as casual
It creates vacuum and laziness that further builds devil's workshop
Only destructive or negative ideas crop up in mind and stay at the top

It is killing me from inside with no social contact
I have remained all these years as social animal in fact
I can't remain idle without writing even for a day
Now it is almost a week that I have been forced to remain away

"I shall pray freely now almighty without any worry or trouble"
"The death of wife had brought an end to his entire struggle"
One of the legendary poet lamented over loss of wife in such a worry free style
I am no greater person but an ordinary man to pull on for a while

I have realized how painful it is to remain cut off
Not all may be attached as much as I am and subjected to laugh
Yet I feel the growing need for person to remain within circle
We are social animal and need constantly to fight on with the struggle

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 December 2012

For almost a week I have remained unread Physically fit, mentally stable and not exactly dead Yet cut off from whole of the word and readers As power cables here are cut by the road repairers

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 December 2012

Hasmukh Bhai, we welcome the elderly man with young poet's heart. KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343 Dec 05,2012

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 December 2012

Welcome back Mr. Mehta! I can completely identify with your situation as I too went thru' a similar one. Do read my Internet Blues... posted on 4th. Thank God the ordeal is over and now we'll have the pleasure of reading you all over again. Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, india Dec 05,2012

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 December 2012

LOLLO BOGEA oh very good my friend.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 December 2012

Re: Not dead (Score: 1) by Zbird on Wednesday, December 05,2012 (08: 46: 28) what a horrible feeling that must have been to be so isolated and alone my friend but now you are back on your poet site where others now read the words you write

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 December 2012

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