Not Determined By Group Effort Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Not Determined By Group Effort



There is one important aspect,
I have learned in the living of my life.
And that is to live it to its fullest.
Regardless of who says what,
With comments to make...
As if my steps made seeks their approval.
Or critical judgements passed to hear,
If I do not impress with them first to address it.
I have learned to live my life,
With the telling of those of what they can do.
AND...
If they do not like those choices I have made.
It took me a long time to learn this in perspective...
The living of my life is not determined by group effort.
With the hopes that my doings...
Are only suitable and aimed towards them to please.
It's not them I thank...I thank God on daily basis,
For opening my eyes to finally awaken.
With the distinct smelling of coffee...
With cream and sugar in a cup and enjoying it.
To sip at my leisure for as long as I choose.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rizvana Parveen 30 January 2012

a thought provoking poem...The living of my life is not determined by group effort.......I thank God on daily basis, For opening my eyes to finally awaken...........Not all have the right perception and right vision of life which makes them judgmental.......

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