Thursday, August 14, 2014

Not Everything I Can Make Into A Poem Comments

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Not everything I can make into a poem
like the sky just after rain
her embroidered smile its minutest hem
in her shade of cornea a grain of pain!
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Valsa George 15 August 2014

It is a paradox that a lovely poem has been born from those topics on which you say you cannot write a poem! So you have proved once again that you can write a poem on anything!

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Valsa George 15 August 2014

It is a paradox that a lovely poem has been born from those topics on which you say you cannot write a poem! So you have proved once again that you can write a poem on anything!

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Lorraine Colon 14 August 2014

Well, You certainly did a good job writing a poem about not being able to write a poem. That's sort of confusing, so I'll just say you wrote a very good poem without knowing it. Hmm, I'd better quit now....

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Geetha Jayakumar 14 August 2014

Beautiful poem. Very true said, not everything I can make into a poem, but you have composed so beautifully, everything into a poem. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 14 August 2014

Such a beautiful poem it really touched my heart......very sweetly composed.......I loved it

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