Not Good Being Alone Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Not Good Being Alone



Not good being alone
Friday,26th October 2018

I have the vision
to analyze the conversation
where you talk about our relationship
it is the only reason for my excitation

so far you were near and dear
Now I feel so much of fear
as you have gone away
and the same situation is likely to stay

in my loneliness
I try to trace
and see
her smiling face

She is the same
for me to claim
and seek safe heaven
she holds my hand even

but let me tell you
I have to pass through
the trauma of being alone
as something more has to be one

Hamukh Mehta

Not Good Being Alone
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Savita Tyagi 26 October 2018

Lovely poem Mehtaji. You have overcome the ills of lonliness to bring out the gems of poetry. And as you say I am sure this struggle can never be underestimated. Thank you for sharing.

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welcome savita ji

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 October 2018

Poetic Birds Hasmukh Mehta Thanks for your lovely poetic words with my appreciation to you Thanks so much brother 馃槆 1 Manage Like 路 Reply 路 4m

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 October 2018

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 October 2018

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 October 2018

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 October 2018

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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