Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 699,140 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Nothing More - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Something pushed me for action
It can be termed as greedy reaction
Sometimes I want beautiful woman
Sometimes lots of treasure to go on

Yes mind is not stable
That has not seen the real struggle
Only dreamed for unreal world
The sufferings have not been told

Ask for the poor man in street
How does he see full day and greet?
Sir, full hell when sun is ablaze
Hell like experience with mad chase

Truly, I realize about future
And feel sore about personal nature
Life is beautiful as well nice
Only we need to commit with promise

Nothing more is expected
Only noble aspect is to be selected
Live for self and family
But keep in mind always about almighty

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Comments about Nothing More by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • S.d. Tiwari (8/28/2014 11:34:00 PM)

    But always keep in mind Almighty. An inspiring poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Gajanan Mishra (8/28/2014 11:29:00 PM)

    noble thoughts, noble aspects, thanks, (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/28/2014 11:25:00 PM)

    I like it

    Sarah DesRoche9 minutes ago
    It's creative and interesting. I like it very much.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/28/2014 11:25:00 PM)

    very studious, be tempered, prioritise

    William Johnson14 minutes ago
    Had to read it through a few times to follow.Pretty deep my friend, good job!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/28/2014 11:24:00 PM)

    For one whose first language is not English, a good effort; I like it


    Kent Krauss18 minutes ago
    Very positive outlook, especially in leaving all in God's hands in the end.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/28/2014 11:23:00 PM)

    Something pushed me for action
    It can be termed as greedy reaction
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 28, 2014



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