Panagiota Romios

Nothing Too Complicated - Poem by Panagiota Romios

I admire so, poets with imagery.
And fascinating allegories.
But me? I'm still a starter.
Far from being a departer.

Not here to impress!
Just be genuinely me and improve
my poetic finesse.
Develop skills, and enjoy in
so doing.
With all kinds of new ideas

August 6,2019

Topic(s) of this poem: poetic expression

Form: Couplet

Comments about Nothing Too Complicated by Panagiota Romios

  • (11/8/2019 7:40:00 PM)

    What a wonderful attitude. Read and improve like us all. (Report)Reply

    (11/8/2019 9:26:00 PM)

    I promise to learn. Thank you so much

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  • Belle Wassermeister (8/12/2019 12:47:00 PM)

    I love your attitude in this witty, feisty piece! We are all learning. The more we write, the more we learn, and Julia and Jane both made valid points in their comments. Read the poetry of others and you will keep improving. I am a relative beginner myself but have learned a lot from the two J's and others on this website. (Report)Reply

    (8/12/2019 3:55:00 PM)

    Thank you. I wrote this to get away from trying to come off as a pompous poet of brilliance.. I am not a beginner, I have written close to 600 poems that are not here. All have been critiqued. None
    Negatively. I won't be negative toward any poet.

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  • (8/10/2019 2:32:00 PM)

    That's a refreshing and charming poem. You are stating it like it is with charming and witty craft. Develop skills and enjoy in so doing! The heart of it all. Fantastic! (Report)Reply

    (8/12/2019 4:00:00 PM)

    Sometimes poetry has to light and fun. I see you get my point. It's best to be me, and stop trying to
    impress people. I am plain Honest. And welcome your remarks. Panagiota thanks

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  • (8/6/2019 7:54:00 PM)

    Far from being a departer spoils the stanza. Departer from what? From what comes before.
    You could have made the case of being a beginner in a better light. As it is now, it does not work.

    (8/10/2019 2:35:00 PM)

    I completely disagree. I love this poem. A departer would be somebody who is on their way out, perhaps a seasoned oldie- giving up or leaving for something else. Although it is a sudden rhyme, I like it and I think it works.

    (8/6/2019 8:17:00 PM)

    Thank you....

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  • (8/6/2019 7:35:00 PM)

    We all are learners in life. Poetry evolves. An honest write. Read as much as you can. You will be surprised how you will improve. (Report)Reply

    (8/6/2019 8:19:00 PM)

    Thanks Jane. Your positive input helps me Panagiota

    (8/6/2019 8:13:00 PM)

    Jane, thank you. I trust your point of view, greatly. Thank you.and yes it was indeed an honest write
    induced. I do well with your pistive direction. Panagiota Romios, bless you.

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  • Chinedu Dike (8/6/2019 7:27:00 PM)

    Great lines! A concise, descriptive, and insightful verse. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing, Panagiota. (Report)Reply

    (8/6/2019 8:07:00 PM)

    Chinedu, greetings... I appreciate you positive input. You are a teacher for me, in how to respond to
    other poets with love and support! Thank you.Panagiota Romois

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 6, 2019

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