Notice Me Poem by Dakota Ellerton

Notice Me

Rating: 4.0


She puts up with guys
when she can do better
they're usually just jerks
trying to be sweet and to get her
no matter what I think
I’ll help when I can
would she like me better
if I were a man?
She talks to them
as if she'd known them forever
what about me?
I’ve been here longer then September
she doesn’t care
about how I feel
she treats me like a friend
and that my feelings aren’t real
i feel so heart broken
because you see
I’ll never get her to notice
or love me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adryan Barnathan 03 December 2008

I need you to hear.....that there is a reason for your pain. we get treated the way we believe we think we deserve to be treated.... remember this always~! Start over...because, there is a reason you feel hurt.... You are Great~! believe in yourself.... like I do. xoxoxoA

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James Mclain 03 December 2008

Patience always prevails only if you are not the one involved.... :)

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