Theorem The Truth Serum

Rookie - 245 Points (1979-present / San Leandro)

Now Do You See Who I Am - Poem by Theorem The Truth Serum

I am a grain of sand
ready to be a piece glass
I want to make myself
transparent so that
everyone could see me
I want to have no walls
and no barriers
I want to treat everyone
the same with no
preferential treatment
given to anybody
Now do you see who I am
I am a man who tries to be good

Comments about Now Do You See Who I Am by Theorem The Truth Serum

  • Ernestine Northover (5/14/2006 8:14:00 AM)

    I can see through you Cokbod, you're just a softy and a lovable being, and can't help being good. Good poem too. Love Ernestine XXX (Report) Reply

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  • (5/13/2006 10:07:00 PM)

    I like the metaphor here, it is very well done. I pray we can all be the best we can be, we can't be better than that. Peace, Aisha (Report) Reply

  • (5/13/2006 9:26:00 PM)

    Don't you wish everyone was like that! This is heartfelt with emotion. A 10. -Lydia (Report) Reply

  • (5/13/2006 9:05:00 PM)

    Thank you for sharing such a heart felt piece.

    Patricia Gale
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 13, 2006

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