Now I'M Shedding Tears Poem by sahar alameddine

Now I'M Shedding Tears

Rating: 5.0


tears now are pouring down my head
as you killed my feelings i have had
now you're gone out of my mind
it's the end now plz don't ever mind

even though i know you won't
but don't hate me plz just dont
i have no idea why this happened
we were happy before as now i lament

you just left without looking behind
you turned ur back and left
now it's my turn to leave
all i want is you to understand

it's the end my dear i am sory for u and for me
what we had between us was real
but u broke every thing without thinking
as now i'm sheding so much tears

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miss Darkness 25 May 2012

yeah exactly, the rode of love is full of doubts u may fall and hurt ur heart or u may be happy at the end :)

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Joseph Poewhit 24 May 2012

Many stories on the STREET of LOVE

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Miss Darkness 18 June 2012

thank u guy i really do appreciate ur comments i hope u also enjoy the rest of my poems and post ur comments and rate them as well :)) and i wil be thankful

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Pooja Karnani 18 June 2012

woww..! ! woww..! ! woww..! ! just woww..! ! ! loved it..! ! :)

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Robert Green 06 June 2012

Very well put young lady, love hurts when broken.

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Miss Darkness 27 May 2012

thx shihabudheen :))

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Shihabudheen K J 27 May 2012

Nice words.thorns of love n grief well figured.

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