O To Make House, Home Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

O To Make House, Home

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Bricks I've cemented with feelings,
Affection brought in laboured innings,
Pouring in my sweat-sullied blood,
Painted have I walls, blood in flood,
All this with lots and lots of love,
Made I've for two this little dome;
Now, if you come, live in, My Love,
Together can we make it home!
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Musings |02.11.2017|

Sunday, February 17, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: home,house,marriage
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Bricks and mortar and cement and what not can at best make a house. What makes it home?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 17 February 2019

A great craftsmanship has produced the nicest possible house to be converted into home. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 18 February 2019

Thanks Ratnakar Mandlik for the feedback.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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