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Thursday, November 5, 2009

Oblivious World

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How's that oblivious world you live in?
Is it any fun?
Are there other people?
Or are you the only one?

Does it take away all the loss?
Does it take away all the pain?
Does it take away the unhappiness?
Does it make you gain?

Would you prefer to be there,
Far away, too far to see?
Or closer, able to understand
Able to be with me?

It's so hard to talk to
Someone so numb and far away.
My mind and opinion of this
Are begining to change and sway.

Is all this worth it?
Talking to a wall?
Receiving all this pain?
But nothing in return, at all?

It's starting to click in my head.
That maybe... this isn't right.
Is it all worth the pain?
Is it worth this fight?

How's that oblivious world you live in?
Is it any fun?
Are there other people?
Or are you... the only one?
Nyl Revol
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COMMENTS
Dick Badian 05 November 2009
have we been married to the same woman? nah only joking...........love your work..... but still.........does the name ': angela'ring a bell?
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Shaon Black 05 November 2009
wow...niceee dude. i like your poem. it has a real nice feel to it. i wish i could write like that. good job; ]
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