Obviously Poem by Sarah Persson

Obviously

Rating: 5.0


I wear my mask, distort my face,
A gentle soul revealed,
But dare you look to deeper grades,
This heart's not really, ever healed.

Cast me glares that cut my throat,
My blood still runs out pure,
Disgrace my name, deface my skin,
No freek lays here, not quite obscure.

An open book, my pages thin,
Sublime in density,
Yes I am masked but I am true,
I'm more than you see, obviously.

Saturday, September 8, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 11 September 2018

Yes, this body is just like mask we wear. This is the mask of soul. Sublime in destiny we still open thin pages of valuable book. Yes, you are more than we see because you are a soul and you have unlimited values and power within. An interesting perceptional poem is very nicely penned...10

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Sarah Persson 12 September 2018

Thank you once again kumarmani for your comments

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Bernard F. Asuncion 09 September 2018

Sarah, such a remarkable write ....10+++++++ but I can’t rate anymore since yesterday hehehe😁😁😁

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Sarah Persson 09 September 2018

Haha thank you Bernard for your support :)

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Naila Rais 08 September 2018

Good....................10..... Thnx for sharing... You may like to read my poems and express your views too... Naila

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