Ocean In The Eyes. Poem by Diya Bhudia

Ocean In The Eyes.

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Those beautiful eyes that cry the most tears,
Resembling the terrific beauty of the oceans,
Swirly waters, running on the smooth skin,
Eyes looking like pearls shut in the shell,
A crave of freedom,
A crave of happiness,
I have the ocean in my eyes,
And the tears are my struggle to survive.

Tuesday, July 9, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: sad,tears,water,beauty,ocean,ocean waves,eyes,struggle
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 13 July 2019

Very impressive write, Diya Bhudia. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Jazib Kamalvi 13 July 2019

A refined poetic imagination, Diya Bhudia. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Diya Bhudia 28 May 2020

Hy Jazib, sorry for not giving an early reply, got really busy with school but i really appreciate your feedback on my poem.

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