daubmir nadir

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Ocean My Sea / Oceano Mio Mare (Bilingual Poem) - Poem by daubmir nadir

Magnificent wave
Until you touch
The sky
Of my efflate

Immense ripple
Of my winged life
Among the spray of
Cold salty brine

Pulsating breaker
Of my inner blaze
Part with your
Oceanic force
The sea of my wonderment

Onda magnifica
Fino a toccare
Il cielo
Del mio efflato

Flutto immenso
Della mia vita alata
Tra gli spruzzi di fredda
Brina salata

Cavallone pulsante
Del tormento interiore
Spacca con la tua
Forza oceanica
Il mare del mio stupore

Comments about Ocean My Sea / Oceano Mio Mare (Bilingual Poem) by daubmir nadir

  • (5/4/2006 5:09:00 PM)

    I wish you had put the Italian version first, then appended the translation. I liked the Italian version very much - but do appreciate the help with translation - my Italian is not so good, I read Dante with Longfellow's translation as an aid. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 25, 2006

Poem Edited: Monday, July 19, 2010

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