Ocean Of Time Poem by Kevin Patrick

Ocean Of Time

Rating: 4.5


On the ocean of time
we are all water drops,
until the weight caves us in
and we end up in plots

Until then lets swim
Making waves in the currents
Determined and resilient
For Horizons more Verdant

Into the days that we sail
For the ferryman's tails

Thursday, January 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 14 January 2016

Time is everything in life; and, we need Time. Nice work.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 08 January 2016

On the ocean of time we are water drops- a nice thought.

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Terry Craddock 07 January 2016

'On the ocean of time we are all water drops, until the weight caves us in' an unexpected turn in the third line, interesting thoughts :)

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 07 January 2016

Very brilliant writing, profound words and very true phrases. We are just drops in the ocean of time.

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