Oceanic Courtship (Haiku) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Oceanic Courtship (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


wavy argent waves
seducing twilight's coy pink—
nocturnal amour

Sunday, October 11, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: ocean,sunset
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 20 November 2015

Swim Salt Of My Being can see feel tidal surge waves currents lost in salt ocean between dawn to sunset in reality memory sublime salt in hair mouth salt in veins dusts skin mind salt infuses tides crystallizes soul Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Oceanic Courtship' by Mihaela Pirjol. Dedicated to the poet Mihaela Pirjol.

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Terry Craddock 14 October 2015

can see and feel the tidal surge of waves currents I have loved so much 'seducing Twilight’s coy pink — nocturnal amour' but then I have always been lost in the salt ocean between dawn to sunset in reality and memory sublime; therefore the salt of my being 10+++ :)

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M Asim Nehal 11 October 2015

AMAZING HAIKU! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! LOVED IT.....great imagery of oceanic courtship with curly silver waves, ..10++++

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