when a tired sun
paints
its last rosy-orange nuances
upon the hopeless canvas of the sea
foreseeing
I feel how our love
sinks with it
for eternity—
octopus tentacles
clenching to my heart
the darkness of the night
tears our souls
apart
I love the imagery in this poignant write. The death in night is eternity.++10
'Clenching to my heart'! ! Facing the odds. Heartache! Love and pain. Thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great lines..octopus tentacles which clench the heart into darkness