Ode.To.The.Fourth.Dimension Poem by narayana aghalaya

Ode.To.The.Fourth.Dimension

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ODE.TO. THE. FOURTH.DIMENSION
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Eons.ago, time - a. series.of.milestones
to.remind.what.needs.to.be.done

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sunrise, sunset, full.moon, new.moon
onset.of.seasons.and.monsoon

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plough.fields, sow.seeds.harvest.crops
time.to.seasons ; else.take.time.to.sob

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how.many.full.moons.was.his.life.span?
the.answer.as.accurate.as.one.can

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instinct, .not.clocks, drove.men.to.work
staring.at.great.danger.if.they.shirk

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parent to child,oral lessons
passed.on,just.the.crucial. essence

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to.fight.enemies-both.animals.and.men
group ;for.the.world.was.so.uncertain

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then.time.had.a.different.link.to.human.life
now.split.seconds.represent.life's.strife

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time.is.now.the.fourth.dimension
space.is.the.rest-one.should.mention

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time.heals.for.sure, it.is.also.a.curse
wounds.from.daily.hounds.need.to.nurse

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deliver.or.perish.the.new.slogan
quality.needs.time? ask.any.moron

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Damocle's.sword.is.not.conducive
for.poem.to.flow.as.I.perceive



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parents.give. kids. quality.time
to.build.castles.in.sand, that. is.grime


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missing.deadlines, is.neither.wise.nor. fine
for.most, punctuality-waste.of.time *

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accident? rush.victim, how-so-ever
don't.neglect.the.golden.hour




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our.daily.life.intertwined.in.conflicts
with.time, one.needs.to.be.very.strict

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there.is.hope.for.the.forgetful.guys
to.do.chores.on.time, there.is.AI

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for.time.let.there.be.a.big.salute
like.or.hate, it.is.always.in.pursuit

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Sunday, February 18, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: clocks,enemies,ode,seasons,time
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
*'He.is.always.late.on.principle, his.principle.being.punctuality.is.a.waste.of.time.'Oscar.Wilde
Golden.Hour-Rush.accident.or.heart.attack.victim.to.hospital.to.save.his.life.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 12 October 2018

sunrise, sunset, full.moon, new.moon onset.of.seasons.and.monsoon.....wonderful ode! Nicely structured! You have put your heart and soul for penning this magnificent work....I sincerely appreciate your draft! (10)

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narayana aghalaya 12 October 2018

Thank you Dr.Swain, for liking my poem on Time, MeToo movement and a few others, and for your generous appreciation.

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