Ode To The Ocean Poem by Aditya Mudbhary

Ode To The Ocean

Rating: 4.8


The hot noon sun rises up,
And the dry leaves of the season drop,
Cigarette smoke and the smell of tobacco rise,
And the loud honk of the car cries.

Life is dull in the city streets,
But the freshness lies where the ocean and land meet,
Deep deep inside, A hundred miles down,
Where no god or man wear a precious crown.

The ocean has its own melody as most think its cruel,
But if thy know it well, Thy will then know it wear the most precious jewel,
Poseidon himself bows down to the goddess,
As he knows the beauty and the ever lasting brightness.

Oh my Mistress I bow down to thee,
Your brightness, Light or beauty all shall see,
Through the eyes of my words, They shall now believe,
The beauty of something they negatively perceived.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fadwa Gmiden 20 November 2010

you have all what u need to be the best and your poems are amazing

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Allan Macli Borges 02 February 2010

i'm amazed with your poetry skill. the theme and the flowing of all is awesome.

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Joseph Poewhit 30 October 2009

Words give a dimension of something

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Obinna Eruchie 30 October 2009

Simple and interesting to read.

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Patrick A. Martin 18 October 2009

Sorry Eddie this is far to good a poem to present like this it needs a severe edit.

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