Aditya Mudbhary

Rookie - 85 Points (December 16 - Still living / Patan, Nepal)

Ode To The Ocean - Poem by Aditya Mudbhary

The hot noon sun rises up,
And the dry leaves of the season drop,
Cigarette smoke and the smell of tobacco rise,
And the loud honk of the car cries.

Life is dull in the city streets,
But the freshness lies where the ocean and land meet,
Deep deep inside, A hundred miles down,
Where no god or man wear a precious crown.

The ocean has its own melody as most think its cruel,
But if thy know it well, Thy will then know it wear the most precious jewel,
Poseidon himself bows down to the goddess,
As he knows the beauty and the ever lasting brightness.

Oh my Mistress I bow down to thee,
Your brightness, Light or beauty all shall see,
Through the eyes of my words, They shall now believe,
The beauty of something they negatively perceived.

Comments about Ode To The Ocean by Aditya Mudbhary

  • Fadwa Gmiden (11/20/2010 12:02:00 PM)

    you have all what u need to be the best and your poems are amazing (Report) Reply

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  • (2/2/2010 5:35:00 AM)

    i'm amazed with your poetry skill. the theme and the flowing of all is awesome. (Report) Reply

  • (10/30/2009 12:44:00 PM)

    Words give a dimension of something (Report) Reply

  • (10/30/2009 11:30:00 AM)

    Simple and interesting to read. (Report) Reply

  • (10/18/2009 12:56:00 AM)

    Sorry Eddie this is far to good a poem to present like this it needs a severe edit. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 16, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, November 5, 2009

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