Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 495,278 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Of Human Body - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Day emerges and takes us to work
With full of zeal and promising word
That I shall be faithful and true too
I have decided to work honestly and pass through

I know it will not be easy
That shall keep me pressed hard and busy
Yet I have strong resolve
To stand fast and solve

Many a times I think of human body
That has been blessed o everybody
But consciously I put myself to question
What more have I to learn as lesson?

I start with family members
But one thing I surely remember
They are more or less strongly attached
I can see the reason behind as conclusion is reached

Since I have attained adulthood
I have fully understood
About human behavior
Deception, treachery and honor

Whole passes off in struggle
Sunset offers me respite little
I go back to home and relax
The night affords muscles to reflex

Comments about Of Human Body by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/20/2013 7:06:00 AM)

    That was so True Sir

    Marwa Zaidan44 minutes ago
    Thank u for sharing
    Well expressed
    Comment 0
    Good poem
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/20/2013 7:06:00 AM)

    Dushyant Bhola25 minutes ago
    Human body daily iterating human functions surrounded by fair and nefarious traits. Nice.
    Comment 0
    The three faces of human behaviour..trechery, deception, and honour...good thinking and a realistic statement..very nicely written
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/20/2013 7:05:00 AM)

    EP Haridasan46 minutes ago
    i like it.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/20/2013 7:05:00 AM)

    responsiblities... work... home..family..

    Farzeen Khan (Unfathomable Poet) 47 minutes ago
    nicely expressed...
    Comment +1
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/20/2013 7:04:00 AM)

    unknownray 194749 minutes ago
    really worthy.
    Comment +1
    Good poem
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/20/2013 7:04:00 AM)

    Walter Jason51 minutes ago
    Good poem
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 20, 2013

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