Sunday, January 10, 2021

Oh, Lord. Comments

Rating: 5.0

How precious is life! ..
Like a slow deep breath, in the night.
Like the breeze that talks, amongst the
trees. Like the shimmering of dew drops,
...
Read full text

Rebecca Navarre
COMMENTS
Lasaad Tayeb 29 June 2021

This poem has many concepts and thoughts in each line. Life is like a gentle wind that blows over trees whose leaves are too fragile to be ruffled. An exceptional piece of writing. neatly organized really loved it, and rated it 5*

1 0 Reply
Dr Dillip K Swain 10 January 2021

Yes, life is like a mild breeze that ruffles delicate leaves of trees! A magnificent poem.... beautifully composed... liked it.

1 0 Reply
Captain Cur 10 January 2021

Rebecca, these most beautiful words to read when one is in need of inspiration.

1 0 Reply
Close
Error Success