Oh My Deluded Mind Poem by Tushar Ray

Oh My Deluded Mind

Rating: 4.5


Oh my deluded mind
Please listen to me carefully Now
Never commit the same error
Again and again
Using your accustomed bad habits

Oh my ignorant mind, prior to start
Just understand the goal at first
Then in a steadfast cautious mode
Simply move to the finish line

Oh my silly mind
Don't bear the burden of errors,
Since error-done can't be undone
By repeating the same error again
Unlike, pulling painful spike from the skin
By a second spike and discard both
So, forget the silly games, Oh my mind,
Just follow the right course
Realizing the path prior to a start
Moving steadfast to the goal
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Saturday, February 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: self reflection
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 20 February 2015

Well composed. I like this. It would be nice if we could always learn from our mistakes and not make the same ones over and over again.

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Tushar Ray

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Kolkata, India
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