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Towards A Noble Desire

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Most adults at times are caught in a tug of war
Amid gratification of ego and own ethical role
And typically in most cases they feel strong pull
Towards their affinity for a self-indulgent goal

So, challenge to a person is to find inner poise
Staying steady in his center with an alert mind
Guarding himself keenly against troubling urge
Focusing to overall good never looking behind

The first thought is often our true feedback guide
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Friday, March 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: changing moods
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Roseann Shawiak 15 March 2015

A fantastic poem, very intense with a beautiful message for us all. Listening to our spirit selves instead of our minds to make good decisions quickly, going with our immediate thoughts and feelings, therefore having a win-win situation and doing no wrong. I believe this to be true as it is how I make decisions, instantaneously. Really great poem, Tushar! You are amazing at translating from one language to another and keeping meanings, feelings and purposes so closely, not losing much of anything in the translation. Great work, Tushar, I for one completely appreciate all the work you go through to post Tagore's work. A heartfelt thank you for doing this, Tushar! RoseAnn

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Roseann Shawiak 15 March 2015

This one is fantastic, what an intense message it carries about listening to our spirits instead of our minds. Going with our first thoughts and feelings about something we make better decisions. I find this to be true, amazing how it has been written into a poem so gently and thoughtfully! Thank you, Tushar. RoseAnn

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 December 2015

Inner poise! With the muse of life. Nice work.

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Savita Tyagi 01 June 2015

Wonderful poem. True guiding principles of life expressed with such ease. it comes from a heart who follows it. I am sure of that.

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A towering.tower of teansformation. Pregnant with positivity!

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Roseann Shawiak 15 March 2015

Fantastic poem with such a great meaning for us all! Listening to our spirit selves instead of our minds, keeps us from making many bad decisions for sure. Using immediate thoughts and feelings does keep us from making or taking the wrong paths in life. Tushar, you are an amazing poet and philosopher on top of being a scientist of the highest caliber, love having you as a best friend! Thank you, RoseAnn

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Roseann Shawiak 15 March 2015

Fantastic poem with such a great meaning for us all! Listening to our spirit selves instead of our minds, keeps us from making many bad decisions for sure. Using immediate thoughts and feelings does keep us from making or taking the wrong paths in life. I know this to be true as I go with my gut feelings instantaneously, it keeps me morally intact. Tushar, you are an amazing poet and philosopher on top of being a scientist of the highest caliber, love having you as a best friend! Thank you, RoseAnn

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