Oh Yeah? Yeah! Poem by Dónall Dempsey

Oh Yeah? Yeah!

Rating: 5.0


Chatting at the bar
waiting to order

I admire her
skirt

tell her she's
delicious in it.

'Oh, you flirt! '
she flirts.

Says she likes my jeans
(how the diamante applique coils & curls
about the thigh)

'Oh, yeah? '
'Yeah! '

Says I'd look better
in her
skirt than her
that I've got
better legs
than her.

'Ya wanna bet? '

'Yeah? '
'Oh yeah! '

I squeeze out of my jeans
she unzips her skirt

(our nether attire around our ankles)
we step out of

our respectibve male & female
roles

swop

stand there at the bar
sipping cocktails

with suggestive
names

untio we are asked
to remove ourselves

from this
establishment
this premises

We leave arm in arm
I as her & she as me

me in my sexy tartan mini
(a tight fit...I admit)

she in jeans just...a little too big for her

leaving a trail of laughter
like neon light on a rainy night.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scarlett Treat 07 May 2008

Only you would have done this trick....and survived without being arrested! Lucky you and she, that you were only thrown out the bar!

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Onelia Avelar 05 May 2008

'leaving a trail of laughter like neon light on a rainy night...' i like this two wonderful closing lines right under the sexy tartan mini :) very much...trail of laughter like neon light...beautiful imagery! Are you still wearing that skirt on, eh? ;)

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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